Trong chuyên mục giải đề Writing lần này, IPP sẽ gửi đến mọi người bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Free Time do các thầy cô của IPP thực hiện. Cùng tham khảo và ghi lại một số từ vựng hay ở cuối bài nhé.
Đề bài IELTS chủ đề Free Time
It was predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent do you think this prediction has come true?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Dàn bài bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Free Time
1. Introduction:
– Introduce the readers to the prediction whether the people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past
– State the writer’s assessment of the prediction (in this case, it has not come true)
2. Body 1: Why technology might have increased the amount of people’s free time
– Numerous labor-intensive tasks have been automated to dramatically reduce the amount of time required for work
– Technology provides flexibility in working to make various entertainment and working options possible
3. Body 2: Why technology did not increase people’s free time
– The lines between work and home life have been blurred
– People have to spend more time staying on social platforms
4. Conclusion:
– Summarize the writer’s opinion
– Recommendation or further remarks based on the writer’s opinion
Bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Free Time
In this era of unprecedented technological advancement, it was once prophesied that technology would bestow upon 21st century humans the gift of abundant free time. I disagree with this claim, however, as reality has not lived up to such a prediction.
It is undeniable that many people have achieved significant gains in terms of free time in the modern age. The automation of numerous labor-intensive tasks has dramatically reduced the amount of time required for both domestic and professional duties. For instance, technological devices have streamlined many workplace processes, allowing tasks that once took hours to be completed in minutes. These advancements, moreover, offer flexible working arrangements, enabling efficient time management and providing options for entertainment that were previously impossible. With access to remote technology, for instance, some employees can work from the comfort of their home, so once they finish work, they can be immediately immersed in their favorite recreational activities. Their leisure time, thereby, is maximized.
Contrary to the idea that technology has increased free time, however, evidence suggests that a decline is the case. Firstly, the lines between work and home life have been blurred, depriving people of personal time. Because of smartphones and remote work technologies, many employees are encouraged, or in some cases, ordered to remain connected and stay open for requests. Inevitably, they find themselves tethered to their duties well beyond traditional working hours. The rise of virtual platforms, furthermore, requires constant engagement from people. As social networking services thrive on users’ interaction, individuals often spend significant portions of their daily life maintaining an online presence, rather than enjoying offline entertainment. These people, therefore, end up with less free time than they would have had without technology.
In conclusion, technology has certainly led to an increase in leisure time, but the prediction that it would grant universal freedom has not come true. Because of its possible infringement on people’s personal time, a conscious effort to balance technology usage is recommended to minimize its negative impacts.
Từ vựng hay đã dùng trong Bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Free Time
– unprecedented (adj): chưa từng có
– prophesy (v): tiên đoán
– bestow (v): ban tặng
– automation (n): tự động hóa
– streamline (v): tinh giản
– blur (v): làm mờ
– tether (v): buộc, gắn chặt
– grant (v): cấp, trao cho
– infringement (n): sự vi phạm
Trên đây là bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Free Time trong Writing Task 2.
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