Trong chuyên mục giải đề Writing lần này, IPP sẽ gửi đến mọi người bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Internet Access do các thầy cô của IPP thực hiện. Cùng tham khảo và ghi lại một số từ vựng hay ở cuối bài nhé.
Ngoài những ích lợi ‘mắt thấy tai nghe’, Internet cũng vẫn tồn tại những hạn chế, ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến học sinh sinh viên và người đi làm.
Hãy cùng IPP đến với bài mẫu Writing task 2 về chủ đề này và trải nghiệm từng bước phân tích đề chi tiết như trong giờ học của lớp Chuyên sâu Speaking-Writing tại IPP nhé!
Đề bài: Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Phân tích đề
Keywords: Internet access, help, young people, workers, achieve, education + work goals, easily
Từ đồng nghĩa với các keywords:
Young people
Workers = employees, staff in a company
Help = assist, act as a tool to sb
Achieve = accomplish, attain, earn, gain
Goal = ambition, intention, objective, target
Education and work goals = academic and occupational targets; students and workers’ progression in their respective fields; education and career paths
Dàn bài bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Internet Access
Outline:
| Advantages of Internet access in helping young people and workers achieve their goals in their education + work | Shortcomings of Internet access in helping young people and workers achieve their goals in their education + work |
As for students:
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Some places have limited access to Internet/Slow internet connection → young people + workers do not profit anything from the Internet |
As for workers:
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Cybercrime (data breach, harmful ransomware or cyber predators)
Internet = distractions to many students and workers |
Personal opinion: despite particular flaws, Internet access is still beneficial to help students and workers accomplish their goals.
Bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Internet Access
For some people, the Internet has efficaciously assisted the young and laborers in fulfilling academic and occupational targets with considerably more ease. From my standpoint, while there are still specific issues, the Internet is indeed a vessel for students’ and workers’ progression in their respective fields.
As a tool for youngsters and employees, the shortcomings of the Internet should be addressed. One problem is Internet accessibility’s global inconsistencies. Many countries, such as Somalia or Venezuela, endure frustratingly slow Internet connection or an overall lack of Internet access. Thus, young people and workers here would miss the chance of benefiting from the Internet, most of whom need this opportunity the most. Furthermore, with the development of the Internet comes the rise of cybercrime. As more institutions and organizations become targets of online threats, students and laborers would be in more risk of data breach, harmful ransomware, or cyber predators committing online exploitation. This growing menace may cause irreversible damage to individuals’ studying and working process.
However, the Internet’s contribution to students and laborers’ accomplishments are much more significant than in the past. Firstly, it offers high-quality yet cost-effective education opportunities to learners worldwide. Some prestigious universities (Harvard, Yale, or Stanford, for instance) have launched free online courses of international standards, covering a wide array of subjects and topics. These provide a chance for less well-off learners to gain access to prime education and hence, giving them a competitive edge once finished. Secondly, workers can reach a broader range of customers and better engage with clients by virtue of the Internet. Businesses, albeit big or small, may reach large audience with properly targeted advertisements online. The availability of Internet connection also allows firms’ staff to enhance customer service, promptly solving real-time concerns of clients notwithstanding the location or time. The ease of building and maintaining a lasting relationship with customers contributes substantially to a worker’s successful professional career.
To conclude, the Internet, despite particular flaws, plays a critical role in the flourishment of young people and laborers’ education and career paths. For a future in which more individuals can benefit from the Internet, collaborative efforts must be made between Internet providers and governments to introduce imperative infrastructural changes.
Từ vựng hay đã dùng trong Bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Internet Access
– Efficaciously: hiệu quả
– Progression: sự tiến bộ, thăng tiến
– Global inconsistencies: tính không đồng đều trên toàn cầu
– Thus: do đó
– Cybercrime: tội phạm mạng
– Data breach: rò rỉ dữ liệu, thông tin
– Ransomware: mã độc để tống tiền
– Cyber predators: kẻ ‘săn mồi’ trên mạng
– Online exploitation: lạm dụng trên mạng
– Growing menace: mối đe dọa đang ngày càng gia tăng
– Irreversible damage: thiệt hại không thể phục hồi
– A wide array of: đa dạng, nhiều
– Prime education: nền giáo dục chất lượng
– Competitive edge: lợi thế cạnh tranh
– By virtue of: nhờ có
– Albeit: mặc dù
– Promptly: nhanh chóng, ngay lập tức
– Real-time concerns: các vấn đề tại thời gian thực
– Notwithstanding: bất kể
– Substantially: đáng kể
– Flourishment: sự phát triển
– Collaborative efforts: nỗ lực hợp tác
– Imperative: cần thiết, thiết yếu
Trên đây là bài mẫu IELTS chủ đề Internet Access trong Writing Task 2.
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