Phần lớn các thông tin được đưa vào đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 đều xuất phát từ những nghiên cứu, số liệu thực tế. Với những đề bài này, ngoài việc trang bị vốn kiến thức đa dạng, hợp xu hướng, chúng ta cũng cần biết cách chọn lọc những thông tin tiêu biểu để bài viết trở nên rõ ràng và nổi bật hơn. Ví dụ như bài mẫu phân tích bảng biểu so sánh giá coffee ở Australia trong năm 2010 và 2014 dưới đây.
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Đề bài: The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.
Phân tích đề coffee prices in Australia
Question type: Comparative graph
Time period: 2010 – 2014 → TENSE TO USE: Simple past tense
Paraphrases of keyword:
- prices of a cup of coffee = how much a cup of coffee costed, listed price, customers were charged A$ for a cup of coffee; selling price
- Percentage change = proportion of, X% difference, an increase/decrease of X%
Dàn bài
Paragraph 1: Introduction + Overview
Introduction: Viết lại đề bài bằng ngôn từ của mình (Paraphrase)
Overview: Các xu hướng chính của biểu đồ
Overview:
Answer the question:
- Main trend? → Increase in the price of a cup of coffee in most cities except for Brisbane
- Biggest vs smallest change in price? → Melbourne saw the biggest increase in price of a cup of coffee vs Canberra = smallest increase
- Most expensive cup of coffe → In Sydney
Option 1: Group according to cities
Paragraph 2: Group Melbourne + Sydney (Reason: group biggest changes)
Paragraph 3: Group Canberra, Adelaide + Perth vs Brisbane (Reason: small change + no change)
Option 2: Group according to year
Paragraph 2: information about the price of a cup of coffee in 2000 in 6 cities
Paragraph 3: information about the price of a cup of coffee in 2004 in 6 cities
Bài mẫu về coffee prices in Australia
The table compares how much a cup of coffee in six Australian cities costed and the percentage change in its price between 2010 and 2014. Overall, after four years, the price of coffee increased in all cities but Brisbane, in which it remained unchanged. Among the price hikes, Melbourne saw the biggest jump, while Canberra experienced the least. Sydney remained the city where coffee was most expensive in both years.
The price of a cup of coffee in Sydney and Melbourne had risen significantly over the last four years. In fact, this beverage cost 2.8 dollars in Sydney in 2010, which was the highest among all cities and it saw a 13.2 percent rise in selling price four years later. Similarly, Melbourne, which ranked second highest in both years for coffee prices, saw the most significant change of 20.8 percent, or 50 cents, from 2.4 dollars at the start of the year.
With the exception of Brisbane, the remaining cities saw a slight variation in the selling price of coffee. Perth’s pricing increased by 7.1 percent from 2010, somewhat more than Adelaide’s increase. In 2014, residents in Perth paid $2.25 per coffee drink, whereas those in Adelaide paid $0.25 less. Canberra was the cheapest spot to get coffee on the list during the same time period, with a charge of only 1.6 dollars and a $1 higher later. Brisbane was the only city where the price of a cup of coffee remained unchanged, at $2.25.
Trên đây là bài mẫu IELTS về coffee prices in Australia trong Writing Task 2.
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